Todays gift was a tin of butter cookies and some bracelets for the girls and a bracelet pen for the boy in the family.
Card:
Poem:
I decided to go with my own creation tonight because all the previous days had started out with "On the ____ day of Christmas" and Zac's poem tonight didn't. I was kind of torn though because I liked his poem but I didn't want to bother him to add to it since he was busy editing pictures.
So in the end I wrote my own.
Here are the two versions:
Zacs:
Five golden rings would be nice,
the way they shimmer in the light
But sparkly bracelets shimmer too,
and cookies just feel so right
Mine:
On the fifth day of Christmas we sing “Five golden rings”
So a box of golden cookies is part of the gift we bring
Also for the kids, we must insist
they wear these “rings” around their wrists
1 comment:
upon rereading my poem - it kinda sucks. good thing you went with yours. Don't know what I was thinking.
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